(Exercise)
Fel charges off without Avis, leaving her to fend for herself in the middle of the woods. She's scared, angry, tense, surprised, betrayed, determined to prove she can do just fine on her own, hurt, concerned Explosive - scream after him ("We're PARTNERS, d**n it!") Symbolic - startled by a bird and kills it Loyal - Runs after Fel Responsible/Stubborn - resolves to finish the mission with or without Fel Hurt - asks Kalla/Quix if Fel hates her after the mission Surprised - stares after him, frozen Scared - radios back to HQ asking what she should do Tense - draws her gun and keeps it out Notices that the moss/pine needles on the ground would muffle her footsteps...as well as those of someone trying to sneak up on her. Hey! I'm going to write my comments like this so you can tell them apart from my 'writing writing'. This is... terrible. Gah. But at least I wrote something, right? *cries* This was part of an exercise I found in a book, though. So there was a purpose to it. I think. (Sorry if all the names are confusing--I just used some of my OCs. I haven't posted any bios for them yet... :/) -Atlas
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